This poem made me think of how we travel through time sometimes big as life and at other times narrow and insignificant, only to reach our destination of the vastness of all we can be big as the ocean within the purpose God created us for.
No one has ever moved me as your poetry does! Blessings Always.
Julia
The spirit that dwells within you flows through me as well. It is easy to see the way God moves through your writings. We are cut from the same cloth my friend. (Psalm 133:1).
Julia
Wow God is so good. That is my favorite verse that I say all the time! Of all the verses you could of said. Where two or three are gathered together in His name there is He in the midst of them. Love the days His people are on the same page.
I often find and use water in poetry or my ummm paintings, as I frustratingly teach myself that my vision doesn’t always make it to the canvass like my poetry does in words. But also used as unheard or read notes left behind, symbolically in colors waiting to be understood by attentive observers of patterns or nuances. But maybe that’s just me.
I enjoy the visualization of a free and flowing river, without any of mankind’s engineering intrusions. These verses take me to Montana’s free-flowing Yellowstone River.
how lovely, Poet.
beautiful, insightful imagery as always 🙂
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Well Thank you my friend.
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This poem made me think of how we travel through time sometimes big as life and at other times narrow and insignificant, only to reach our destination of the vastness of all we can be big as the ocean within the purpose God created us for.
No one has ever moved me as your poetry does! Blessings Always.
Julia
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I’m happy to read you relate so well to my post. You continue to humble me. Thank you dearly. May you continue to be be blessed…
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The spirit that dwells within you flows through me as well. It is easy to see the way God moves through your writings. We are cut from the same cloth my friend. (Psalm 133:1).
Julia
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Romans 8:28 And we know that to them that love God, all things work together unto good, to such as, according to his purpose, are called to be saints.
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Wow God is so good. That is my favorite verse that I say all the time! Of all the verses you could of said. Where two or three are gathered together in His name there is He in the midst of them. Love the days His people are on the same page.
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Yes, because there is no where else for them to be. 😉
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Exactly! There is no where else worth being than in the Lord! Our All in All.
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We have our mission that has been assigned to no other…
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So True……….. Only we can carry out what we have been equipped to do.
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Agreed…
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Very nice expression, carrying a beautiful message.. a good metaphor indeed!
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Thank you.
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An interesting metaphor for life, for living. Many lessons about life can be learned from observing flowing water.
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Yes, water (metaphorically or otherwise) is a true mirror for all aspects of life. Thank you for reading and a keen comment.
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Many great quotes about this idea. 💦 You are welcome. 🙏🏻
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I often find and use water in poetry or my ummm paintings, as I frustratingly teach myself that my vision doesn’t always make it to the canvass like my poetry does in words. But also used as unheard or read notes left behind, symbolically in colors waiting to be understood by attentive observers of patterns or nuances. But maybe that’s just me.
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Sounds like an interesting, thoughtful, and creative way to be. ✨
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Thank you
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lovely feeling and flow to your poem always Poet.
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Thank you kindly
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You’re welcome!!
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I enjoy the visualization of a free and flowing river, without any of mankind’s engineering intrusions. These verses take me to Montana’s free-flowing Yellowstone River.
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Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it so well.
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