I'm the aberrational poet your English teacher warned you not to read or follow into the literary abyss. If you steal my poetry...I will find you in between fogyish metaphoric lines. I'll be armed with my quill and papyrus where at will I can wield my power as a writer to erase you from my realm. I will smudge you with inky darkness and do unprintable things like a ghost in imaginary darkness.
In full disclosure, I am absurdly mad and take no responsibility for my actions if crossed poetically. But, otherwise, I’m a simple free spirited poetic writer wordsmithing outside the grammatical lines and rules. An easy going romantic rebel at heart.
I write meaningful (to me) poetry from my heart and share it here. I tend to approach everyone as a friend until they demonstrate something different. I enjoy having creative exchanges with others, like-minded artists, or writers.
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23 thoughts on “Designated”
This poem overflows with emotion as well as love which will never cease.
I thought you were writing of romantic love until the last line…ah, that was a killer.
I’ve seen it often–a couple separates, and so many, many times the children separate as well, gravitating to one parent or the other, and in nearly all cases, it’s the father that suffers. It shouldn’t be that way.
I know some of your poems originate from personal experience, and some do not; If it’s the former, I hope you find peace with it.
is one person's journey told through short stories and poems. "She smiled defiantly, knowing her skin looked even more enticing in the moonlight." Vesna
This poem overflows with emotion as well as love which will never cease.
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Thank you much. Loosing even an adult child that can’t be saved is a heavy burden to accept.
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The last line changes everything and makes the poem so poignant!
Certain loss is too painful to bear. May no one ever witness that. Amen!
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Unfortunately many do experience the loss. Thank you
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Loosing someone in life is never easy and the emotions you feel are clearly seen in your words, may you have the courage to get through it all.
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Thank you my friend. It will be a process.
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You’re most welcome! It will be a process but you’ll get through it ❤️
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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My heart weeps. Hugs my dear friend❤️
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Thank you
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❤️
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So poignant! Hugs to you 🤍
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Thank you kindly
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no words my friend…. the heart knows what can’t be expressed in words or fixed. I hope you can feel this hug through the ethers. 💖💖💖🤗🤗🤗🙏🙏🙏🙏
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Yes, and Thank you again.
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yes, of course. 💖💖🙏🙏🙏
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I thought you were writing of romantic love until the last line…ah, that was a killer.
I’ve seen it often–a couple separates, and so many, many times the children separate as well, gravitating to one parent or the other, and in nearly all cases, it’s the father that suffers. It shouldn’t be that way.
I know some of your poems originate from personal experience, and some do not; If it’s the former, I hope you find peace with it.
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Thank you kindly. Peace may take time to find. Losing your closest child beyond words.
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I can’t even begin to imagine the pain. 💙
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Honestly, I wouldn’t want anyone to try, and Thank you
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Yes when we loose someone then we realise the value. Very well written with full of emotion thank you for sharing 🎉🙂💕
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Good postings. Appreciate it.
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