I’m a deep visualizing poet creating particular facets, not only line by line, but even the shades and innuendo's between them; to the point that, I can get so comfortably caught up in my imaginations first imperfect draft that I sometimes just move in to stay there… rhetorical, spelling, grammar, mechanics be damn, nothing in life is that perfect. I don’t need tailor made, I need someone/something to fit well enough that it becomes fashionable for me to wear well. I don’t need to pretend to know everything and I resist pontificating those things I’m well versed in.
I'm just a simple romantic at heart waiting on a perfect storm to completely sweep over me like a gentle fresh dawn. In the meantime, I write meaningful (to me) poetry from my heart and share it here. I tend to approach everyone a friend, until they demonstrate something different. I enjoy having creative exchanges with other like minds artist, writers.
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This was painful to read. Especially the last 2 lines. 🥺
God bless the beautiful soul! 🙏💕
I agree. I have. Unfortunately, domestic violence is committed by both genders fairly equally. With that being said, our boys must never raise a hand to any woman. Vacating violence is a must-duty for oneself.
No lines can tame the sadness of this story and yet with your poetry you managed to say the truth and give us a chance to think about what we did or didn’t do to stop it from happening.
Domestic Violence is and will remain a disaster and will keep taking lives, till it’s not taken into consideration for what it is: a real society issue
Poésie et textes originaux par Marina Rogard - Un autre regard sur l'amour, une parenthèse de lumière avec des mots qui jouent et dansent avec les coeurs.
This was painful to read. Especially the last 2 lines. 🥺
God bless the beautiful soul! 🙏💕
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Yes, I agree. Totally avoidable.
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An incredible tribute to Gabby Petito! Beautiful and kind…hopelessly sweet!
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Thank you.
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So heartbreaking. If only we, they had done more. Oh what we need to teach our young girls. To keep them protected from this. 😔 to
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I agree. I have. Unfortunately, domestic violence is committed by both genders fairly equally. With that being said, our boys must never raise a hand to any woman. Vacating violence is a must-duty for oneself.
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Yes, I agree. Just so sad 😔
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I feel the ever-present pain and life’s missing rhythm throughout these verses. You have crafted a lasting tribute.
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Thank you much.
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No lines can tame the sadness of this story and yet with your poetry you managed to say the truth and give us a chance to think about what we did or didn’t do to stop it from happening.
Domestic Violence is and will remain a disaster and will keep taking lives, till it’s not taken into consideration for what it is: a real society issue
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I believe we recognize the need to do something, we just lack the courage to act properly in most cases. Thank you for reading and your comments both.
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😥😥😥
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