Loves frame of mind

I’d want to extract the real you

Only to paint you in picture perfect

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Where we fashionable picnic in a park

Then lay in each other’s arms, kissing

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Near vast remote lakes to go camping

Skinny dipping in its sun warm waters

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Spend half a morn picking wild flowers

And we’d sit beneath a tree laughing

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Afternoon stroll along the beach

Planning to do absolutely nothing

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Sit within each other’s bodily clutch

As evening breeze teases a campfire

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Breakfast at dawn while under covers

Then you, in my long tail shirt, smiling

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Day hikes, off to those silent summits

Where we breathe in pure unspoiled life

.

Long hand holding walks in the woods

As peelings of lived colors fall upon

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Winter’s precursor to powder snowfall

Where we lay and make soul angels

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Stroll in sporadic flakes of white ashes

Before long close nights of making love

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Oh- if I was such a painter of loves magic

I’d dip myself in wine and get drunk on…us

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Poet of the Light © 2020

11 thoughts on “Loves frame of mind

  1. Gorgeous as usual. You have a true talent for imagery.

    Questions:

    1) “within one another” – should this be “within one another’s”?
    2) “breath” – should this be “breathe” (a verb, rather than a noun)?
    3) “winters” or “winter’s”? and (same question, really) “loves” or “love’s”?

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