Loves frame of mind

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I’d want to extract the real you

Only to paint you in picture perfect

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Where we fashionable picnic in a park

Then lay in each other’s arms, kissing

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Near vast remote lakes to go camping

Skinny dipping in its sun warm waters

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Spend half a morn picking wild flowers

And we’d sit beneath a tree laughing

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Afternoon stroll along the beach

Planning to do absolutely nothing

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Sit within each other’s bodily clutch

As evening breeze teases a campfire

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Breakfast at dawn while under covers

Then you, in my long tail shirt, smiling

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Day hikes, off to those silent summits

Where we breathe in pure unspoiled life

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Long hand holding walks in the woods

As peelings of lived colors fall upon

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Winter’s precursor to powder snowfall

Where we lay and make soul angels

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Stroll in sporadic flakes of white ashes

Before long close nights of making love

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Oh- if I was such a painter of loves magic

I’d dip myself in wine and get drunk on…us

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Poet of the Light © 2020

Published by Poet of the Light

I’m a deep visualizing poet creating particular facets, not only line by line, but even the shades and innuendo's between them; to the point that, I can get so comfortably caught up in my imaginations first imperfect draft that I sometimes just move in to stay there… rhetorical, spelling, grammar, mechanics be damn, nothing in life is that perfect. I don’t need tailor made, I need someone/something to fit well enough that it becomes fashionable for me to wear well. I don’t need to pretend to know everything and I resist pontificating those things I’m well versed in. I'm just a simple romantic at heart waiting on a perfect storm to completely sweep over me like a gentle fresh dawn. In the meantime, I write meaningful (to me) poetry from my heart and share it here. I tend to approach everyone a friend, until they demonstrate something different. I enjoy having creative exchanges with other like minds artist, writers. Thank you for reading, commenting and your visit. I appreciate all the feedback (good or bad) you care to offer. Feel free to reach out by email for private exchanges if you wish.

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11 thoughts on “Loves frame of mind”

  5. Gorgeous as usual. You have a true talent for imagery.

    Questions:

    1) “within one another” – should this be “within one another’s”?
    2) “breath” – should this be “breathe” (a verb, rather than a noun)?
    3) “winters” or “winter’s”? and (same question, really) “loves” or “love’s”?

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